WRITING TIME

Well now that classes are over until the fall it is time to write.  I plan to get a great deal accomplished over the next three months on my novel.  I have put  a couple of paragraphs below for you to get a short view into "Josephine."  I hope you will give me feedback on what you think.


I have been busy getting other life things out of the way so there will be full concentration on writing for several hours each day.  Yesterday I spent just proofreading and doing grammar corrections on the first couple of chapters and believe they are in order.  I can now move forward with completing the remaining chapters.


FROM JOSEPHINE

As I began to slip into a deep depressive state, I had my second husband removed, with the help of law enforcement, from our home.  Within a few months, lost in alcohol every day, I agreed to return the children we adopted back to the agency to get proper care and counseling.

I’ve lost everything; two families, two marriages, my job, my apartment but most of all myself.   I now am staying with friends until I can figure out how to put my life back together.

So now tell me what you think of the above two paragraphs and if you would continue to read from there.